Author: keichwa
Date: Tue Jul 31 15:32:40 2007
New Revision: 39839
URL: http://svn.opensuse.org/viewcvs/yast?rev=39839&view=rev
Log:
update by Sabine
Modified:
trunk/slide-show/SuSELinux/slideshow.xml
Modified: trunk/slide-show/SuSELinux/slideshow.xml
URL: http://svn.opensuse.org/viewcvs/yast/trunk/slide-show/SuSELinux/slideshow.x…
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--- trunk/slide-show/SuSELinux/slideshow.xml (original)
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@@ -32,21 +32,19 @@
<para>This distribution is created by the openSUSE.org project. The
openSUSE project, sponsored by Novell, is a collaborative community
effort to deliver the world's most usable open source computing
- platform, the openSUSE distribution. Hosted at opensuse.org, the
- project features a transparent development process, simple
- participation models, extensive development tools, and easy access
- to builds and releases for everyone. Visit www.opensuse.org to learn
- how you can join the openSUSE community.</para>
- </section>
+ platform, the openSUSE distribution. Hosted at opensuse.org, many individuals
+ are involved in packaging software, testing programs, writing documentation,
+ and also localizing components.</para>
+
+ <para>openSUSE is available in many languages. Localization for openSUSE
+ specific software is done by community-driven language teams. Find the
+ localization portal at http://i18n.opensuse.org/ .</para>
+
+ <para>Visit www.opensuse.org to learn how you can join the openSUSE
+ community.</para>
+
+
- <section label="02_05_localization">
- <title>openSUSE Localization</title>
-
- <para>The openSUSE project is a community project and many individuals are
- involved in packaging software, testing programs, writing documentation, and
- also localizing components. Localization for openSUSE specific software is
- done by language teams. Find the localization portal at
- http://i18n.opensuse.org/ .</para>
</section>
<section label="03_connect">
@@ -56,14 +54,14 @@
browsing and e-mail management and even includes the newest Internet-based
phone technology.</para>
- <para>The Firefox Web browser is the best Web browser in the market. It
+ <para>The Firefox Web browser is one of the best Web browser in the market. It
boasts a complete set of browser features, including Java, Adobe Reader,
RealPlayer, and Macromedia Flash plug-ins, plus lightning-fast
performance.</para>
<para>Novell Evolution and Kontact are complete e-mail and contact managers
that you can use to manage all your mail accounts. openSUSE also includes
- Linphone and Twinkle, Internet-based (VoIP) solutions that let you call
+ state-of-the-art Internet-based (VoIP) solutions that let you call
people connected to the Internet all over the world.</para>
</section>
@@ -82,21 +80,20 @@
<title>Documents, Spreadsheets, and More</title>
<para>openSUSE &suse-version; comes complete with the latest version of the
- leading Linux productivity suite, OpenOffice.org 2.0. Openoffice.org includes
+ leading Linux productivity suite, OpenOffice.org. Openoffice.org includes
a word processor, spreadsheet application, HTML editor, presentation
designer, and database. It also reads and writes files you can use with
popular non-Linux productivity software. It is the perfect choice for
reports, papers, home budgets, and simple graphics.</para>
-
</section>
<section label="06_graphics">
<title>Graphics, Graphics, Graphics</title>
- <para>With the tools in openSUSE, you can create or edit practically any
- kind of graphics. For advanced image manipulation and graphics creation, use
- the GIMP, a complete image retouching, composition, and
- authoring tool. GIMP has enough features to satisfy the most exacting
- artist.</para>
+
+ <para>With the tools in openSUSE, you can create or edit practically any kind
+ of graphics. For advanced image manipulation and graphics creation, use
+ powerful tools like the GIMP, a complete image retouching, composition, and
+ authoring tool. </para>
<para>For vector graphics, try Inkscape, a versatile graphics solution
complete with support for transparent layers, bitmap tracing, text paths, and
@@ -104,82 +101,64 @@
</section>
-<section label="07_kde">
- <title>The Latest Desktop Innovations</title>
- <para>openSUSE provides you with a choice of the most usable graphical
- desktop environments. Choose from the most up-to-date Linux graphical
- environments--GNOME and KDE--each combining ease of use,
- contemporary functionality, and outstanding graphical design with the
- technological superiority of the Linux operating system.</para>
-
- </section>
-
<section label="08_mobility">
<title>Computing On-the-Go</title>
- <para>If you run Linux on a laptop, you will be glad you chose openSUSE. It
- includes the most advanced mobility features. Switch between wireless and
- wired networks with our NetworkManager, connect with mobile phones and PDAs
- that support Bluetooth, and even use infrared ports to synchronize with cell
- phones or PalmOS devices. Of course, USB memory sticks are no
- problem. Finally, new power management features give you the option to
- "suspend" your session, saving it to disk or RAM. Not only does suspend allow
- you to turn off and restart the system faster, but when you do restart,
- you are exactly where you were when you stopped.</para>
+ <para> openSUSE includes the most advanced mobility features. Switch between
+ wireless and wired networks using NetworkManager. Connect with mobile devices
+ like mobile phones and PDAs via Bluetooth. Use infrared ports to synchronize
+ your data. Newest innovations in power management increase your
+ mobility.</para>
</section>
<section label="09_security">
<title>Keep Your System Secure and Up-to-Date</title>
- <para>If your system is connected to the Internet, SUSE Firewall helps secure
- your system and data from Internet
- intruders. Leaving it activated gives you enormous protection and configuring
- it to your needs takes only a moment. openSUSE also includes AppArmor,
- the most effective and easy-to-use Linux application
+
+ <para>SUSE Firewall helps secure your system and data from Internet
+ intruders. It is activated by default and easy to configure. openSUSE also
+ includes AppArmor, the most effective and easy-to-use Linux application
security system available today. It proactively protects the operating
system and applications from external or internal threats.</para>
- <para>openSUSE also includes a special security patch update system. As
- security patches are created for the Linux kernel and packages included in
- openSUSE, we make those available to you on a special update server. To
+ <para>openSUSE also includes a special security patch update system. To
ensure that the latest security patches are installed on your system,
choose to perform an online update at the end of this installation
- procedure. In the future, the update system keeps you informed of the
- availability of important security updates, so you can install them at your
- convenience.
+ procedure. In the future, you will be informed of the availability of
+ important security updates, so you can install them at your convenience.
</para>
</section>
<section label="10_devel">
- <title>Powerful Home Networking and Application Development Tools</title>
+ <title>Virtualization Technology and Application Development Tools</title>
- <para>openSUSE includes tools for network file sharing and printing (Samba),
- Web hosting (Apache), and virtualization (Xen). For application development,
+ <para>openSUSE includes the highest performing virtualization software, the
+ XEN hypervisor. In addition, openSUSE provides tools for network file
+ sharing, printing (Samba) and Web hosting (Apache). For application development,
openSUSE comes with a complete set of runtime environments plus extensive
- application development tools, including KDevelop, Eclipse, and Mono. That
- means that if you can imagine it, you can probably build it with openSUSE.
- At openSUSE.org, you can join with thousands of other openSUSE
- users to collaborate and create powerful new packages that you can
- use.</para>
+ application development tools, including KDevelop, Eclipse, and Mono. Almost
+ everything can be build with openSUSE.</para>
+
+ <para>Join openSUSE.org to collaborate. Create and share new packages for
+ multiple Linux distribution using the unique and powerful openSUSE Build
+ Service.</para>
</section>
<section label="11_docs">
- <title>Learn More with Documentation</title>
- <para>openSUSE includes both SUSE-specific and general Linux
- documentation. The SUSE Help Center, available from the main menu or
- with the susehelp command, provides one-stop access to all the help
- included with your system. For example, use it to read the SUSE manuals,
- man pages, and info pages. If you want to print your own copy of the
- manuals, you can download a PDF version. Find the URL for the PDFs at
- <!-- translator: check whether a dedicated page exists for your language
+ <title>Learn More</title>
+ <para>openSUSE provides extensive documentation for SUSE-specific as well
+ as general Linux-related questions. The SUSE Help Center is accessible via
+ the main menu. Manuals are also available in PDF-format and can be
+ downloaded and printed
+<!-- translator: check whether a dedicated page exists for your language
and use it instead of "en" -->
- http://en.opensuse.org/Documentation.
+(http://en.opensuse.org/Documentation).
</para>
<para>
- Even more documentation is available in the openSUSE wiki at
+ Even more information is available in the openSUSE wiki at
<!-- translator: check whether a dedicated page exists for your language
and use it instead of "en" -->
http://en.opensuse.org/. In Documentation, find links to all sorts of
@@ -193,9 +172,9 @@
<section label="12_novell">
<title>Novell and Linux</title>
<para>
-Novell is committed to your success with Linux.
-Besides openSUSE, Novell delivers an exciting suite of products designed
- to meet the needs of businesses large and small.</para>
+Novell is committed to your success with Linux. Besides openSUSE, Novell
+delivers an exciting suite of products designed to meet the needs of businesses
+large and small.</para>
<para>
The enterprise Linux products from Novell include SUSE Linux Enterprise Server,
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