Nelson Marques wrote:
With heart filled with love and will to help, I would like the bring the following to your consideration (specially after a call for translations) regarding this document[1]
Nelson, it's about marketing - how about this sentence "delivers a better system log experience with journald". A better system log experience, woohoo.
1. Usage of therm 'refurbished' for a new distribution;
Not the best choice, I agree.
2. Usage of 'novel features'; once more I find hard that non-native english speakers will go with the correct semantics of this kind of wording; I assume people want to say 'striking new, surprisingly'. I think this can be improved too (considering maybe non-native english speakers which might find this therminology obsfuscated).
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