Nelson Marques wrote:
With heart filled with love and will to help, I would
like the bring
the following to your consideration (specially after a call for
translations) regarding this document
Nelson, it's about marketing - how about this sentence "delivers a
better system log experience with journald". A better system log
1. Usage of therm 'refurbished' for a new
Not the best choice, I agree.
2. Usage of 'novel features'; once more I
find hard that non-native
english speakers will go with the correct semantics of this kind of
wording; I assume people want to say 'striking new, surprisingly'. I
think this can be improved too (considering maybe non-native english
speakers which might find this therminology obsfuscated).
novel = new.
Per Jessen, Zürich (8.4°C)
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