As first, here is a new version; just fixed typos and some tiny text corrections. http://dl.dropbox.com/u/294274/opensuse/PR-Kit/oS-Project-Flyer-V5b.pdf ... On 03.08.2010, at 14:29, S.Kemter wrote:
Am Dienstag, den 03.08.2010, 13:18 +0200 schrieb Robert Lihm:
Hello All!
As first, thank you for your feedback which was really helpful. The new version is now available here:
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/294274/opensuse/PR-Kit/oS-Project-Flyer-V4b.pdf
We cut the text down, fixed the typos and added other screenshots.
Just to answer few of your questions:
1. The stuff will be printed and folded (!) by a print house. 2. The flyer is targeting people who already use Linux. It should gibe a brief overview about the project, etc. 3. The green has a good contrast on white paper. 4. An URL-Shortener would be cool ;-)
Sorry for being brief, 'm a bit in hurry :-)
1. give the frontpage more love, it looks a little bit boring for me
The front page is good as it is. I would call it serious or clean instead of boring. Not very kind btw.
2. Christian said it make the headlines in 5th leg
As the flyer should be timeless and serious I decided to not use the Cholla Font (or 5th leg) in this case. Sure, its part of our branding, but I want to have a clear motion in the flyer and Cholla does not fit. A valid point and a good suggestion! Maybe we can use it next time more often.
3. second page looks to empty
You mean page 6 (flyer-back) which is green too? It's not good to fill every square-inch (or square-px in web design) with informations. Sorry, but i disagree with you in this case.
for distro add LXDE & XFCE snapshots that should fill the page
We have a KDE and a Gnome shot. That enough.
for project there are some pics on gallery.o.o ppl sitting in a room and listen, shows the learning side ;) that should fill the second page.
We should chose the pictures with more attention next time. Choosing pictures now is a bit late. But you could send me few links of pictures which we could use next time. Would be really nice if you could do that :-)
third pag should be tha last one, there can be a little bit room its not so bad.
links on that page, the green isnt so good readable there. On first page u make the links big, maybe that makes it a little bit better
I'm surrounded by proof-prints and the green is good readable. Thank you for your suggestions and your feedback! Best, Robert
br gnokii
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