Sankar P wrote:
On 11/9/2009 at 08:05 PM, in message <4AF828C7.4060107@gmail.com>, Shayon
wrote: Hello! , Well i just finished with the video creation/designing. :) .What ever i could have done to make it better than the previous one i have done concerned to all the information which got from the openSUSE website.And by using all Linux compatible video editing softwares,With a licensed music in the background :) .
Heres The link - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0jQ9XXWrUMQ&feature=channel * Looking forward for your comments and opinions ASAP! before the release so as to make the prior changes, focus more on the text part as the major edits would be a bit of tough job to complete :) .*
I am not a native English speaker. But I believe:
At about 1:13, the statement reads:
openSUSE 11.2 included a YaST web-interface.......
I believe it should be:
openSUSE 11.2 includes a YaST web-interface.....
included vs includes
May be I could be wrong as well. Some native english speaker can correct :-)
yes its right.Sorry for the mistake.And thanks for the correction :)
-- Sankar http://psankar.blogspot.com
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