The text introduction letter-by-letter gets hard to watch after a few slides of it, are there any other text transitions that could be used to create a variety? Other than that, pretty good! I am really looking forward to seeing the public reation to the launch. ~MB On Mon, Nov 9, 2009 at 11:38 AM, Joe 'Zonker' Brockmeier wrote:

On Mon, Nov 9, 2009 at 9:35 AM, Shayon wrote:

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Looking forward for your comments and opinions ASAP! before the release so as to make the prior changes, focus more on the text part as the major edits would be a bit of tough job to complete :)  .*

I have a few comments - first question, though, is whether we can get the text broken out from the video to make edits?

First, - thanks! Looks great so far, and I think you're very close here.

* Might be a good idea to change up the music slightly. I think it gets a bit monotonous after about 30 seconds. Maybe there's a second piece of music we could use?

* Better yet - what about providing a voice over?

* The font used probably should be Fifth Leg and a bit larger.

* Can we move the font scroll to the bottom of the screen?

Other thoughts?

Best,

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Joe 'Zonker' Brockmeier wrote:

I have a few comments - first question, though, is whether we can get the text broken out from the video to make edits?

yea sure , but that also to an extent !

First, - thanks! Looks great so far, and I think you're very close here.

Welcome!

* Might be a good idea to change up the music slightly. I think it gets a bit monotonous after about 30 seconds. Maybe there's a second piece of music we could use?

You mean to say that, we should two kind of music in it ? :)

* Better yet - what about providing a voice over?

Sure, but i dont have a good voice :-) .And if at all it has to provided .Then at which stage ?

* The font used probably should be Fifth Leg and a bit larger.

Sure, i'll do it :)

* Can we move the font scroll to the bottom of the screen?

Well its a bit tough job.As the Linux software which i am using, i don't think it supports that kind of changes.As the project has already been modified

Other thoughts?

Best,

Zonker

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hello, Aldo Duran wrote:

Awesome!!!

A few things:

* can you make it wait 1 sec after the text scroll? * the text in the social network application get lost, could it be a bit larger?

Sure!!

Excellent work.

Thanks!

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Hello! , Well i just finished with the video creation/designing. :) .What ever i could have done to make it better than the previous one i have done concerned to all the information which got from the openSUSE website.And by using all Linux compatible video editing softwares,With a licensed music in the background :) .

Heres The link - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0jQ9XXWrUMQ&feature=channel * Looking forward for your comments and opinions ASAP! before the release so as to make the prior changes, focus more on the text part as the major edits would be a bit of tough job to complete :) .* * * Best, Shayon

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Sankar P wrote:

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On 11/9/2009 at 08:05 PM, in message <4AF828C7.4060107@gmail.com>, Shayon

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Hello! , Well i just finished with the video creation/designing. :) .What ever i could have done to make it better than the previous one i have done concerned to all the information which got from the openSUSE website.And by using all Linux compatible video editing softwares,With a licensed music in the background :) .

Heres The link - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0jQ9XXWrUMQ&feature=channel * Looking forward for your comments and opinions ASAP! before the release so as to make the prior changes, focus more on the text part as the major edits would be a bit of tough job to complete :) .*

I am not a native English speaker. But I believe:

At about 1:13, the statement reads:

openSUSE 11.2 included a YaST web-interface.......

I believe it should be:

openSUSE 11.2 includes a YaST web-interface.....

included vs includes

May be I could be wrong as well. Some native english speaker can correct :-)

yes its right.Sorry for the mistake.And thanks for the correction :)

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