On Wednesday 15 April 2009 10:15:43 am Joe 'Zonker' Brockmeier wrote:
2009/4/15 Александр Мелентьев
: openSUSE: Powered by Lizards, Designed for Humans
Good one - any thoughts? Improvements?
Just little permutation: openSUSE Designed for Humans Powered by Lizards - 3 short lines allow bigger font that is readable from distance. - it seems more important to underscore that is designed for humans, as special meaning of Lizards is not well know outside openSUSE, so message would look like: openSUSE Powered by xxxxxxxxx, Designed for Humans instead of: openSUSE Designed for Humans, Powered by xxxxxxxxx I don't know what other do, but I tend to focus on the begin of sentence and top of the article, and if that is not compelling, the rest has no chance to enter the focus. -- Regards, Rajko -- To unsubscribe, e-mail: opensuse-marketing+unsubscribe@opensuse.org For additional commands, e-mail: opensuse-marketing+help@opensuse.org