I agree with jdd, "chacun" is already the translation of "anyone" no need to add "à tous" it just makes the sentence heavier. Cheers Fabrice On 5/13/06, jdd <jdd@dodin.org> wrote:

Jonh Arson wrote:

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First paragraph on the french wiki main page sound a bit weird.

Proposed corrections: OpenSUSE est un programme communautaire mondial, sponsorisé par [http://www.novell.com Novell], pour donner à tous et chacun un accès facile et gratuit à SUSE Linux. Ici, sur openSUSE.org, vous trouverez une communauté de développeurs et d'utilisateurs qui ont le même but en tête : faire de SUSE la meilleure distribution Linux au monde.

the only difference I see is that you add this:

"à tous et" (à chacun)

I don't really see what is added by this. SUSE Linux is used by people, so "chacun" is the translation of the "anyone" english word.

I agree the whole phrase could be smoother :-) but the problem is on the english side, I already simplified a bit the text - the original one is still available in http://fr.opensuse.org/Vue_d'ensemble_du_projet (and I think most readers did not read all this stuff :-)

I would be glad to find a whole better wording for the front page, but it would be probably better to follow up to the french list

thanks jdd

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