On 09/12/2010 11:51, Jos Poortvliet wrote: [pruned]
Ok. Here goes. Attached the almost-final draft.
[pruned] I think there are areas which need a bit more attention. First: Target users We cater for users who are interested in computers and want to experiment, learn or get work done. The most important target audience is mentioned last - ie those who want to get work done. Those who want to get work done should be mentioned first. Second: What do we not focus on? The openSUSE community has its goals and targets; consequently there are things that are not in the direct focus of our community. *This does of course not mean* it is not possible The part in bold lettering should read: "Of course this does not mean it is not possible......". Three: openSUSE does not: * Oversimplify the system to the point where configuring it becomes harder. We prefer flexibility over an (extreme) focus on ease of use. * Always *having* the latest and greatest in the shipped releases. The word here should be "*have*" and not "having" so that the whole thing would read, "openSUSE does not always have the latest and greatest......". For your consideration. BC -- Attorney: Are you qualified to give a urine sample? Witness: Are you qualified to ask that question? -- To unsubscribe, e-mail: opensuse-project+unsubscribe@opensuse.org For additional commands, e-mail: opensuse-project+help@opensuse.org