Hi On Mon, 18 Jul 2016 22:56:36 +0200 Christian Boltz wrote:
In the first paragraph, I'd mention Provo to avoid that the admins in Nürnberg, including you, also get blamed by people who don't read the full article.
I see this a bit different - maybe because I'm working here... From my point, we are *one* team, even if we are distributed across countries and even companies. If one fails, the other ones might at the moment not be able to step in - but who from the outside cares if it's "they" or "we"? Guess someone breaks in to one of my machines. Would it be my fault? Yes. Would the community (and not only the openSUSE community) see it as "my" personal fault - or would they see it as "IT" fault in general? I'm fine with blaming inside the team, but to the outside we should become - and react - as one team. Nothing else matters ;-)
Second paragraph: ... and we_'d_ like to share some of the results here to inform everyone ____ and actively ask for help. (we -> we'd, and drop "about the results" because that repeats the first half of the sentence)
Correct, fixed.
If you first want to know more about the status, read on… Meeting minutes openSUSE Heroes, 2016-06-26 Participants: cboltz, orangecms, adalovelace, ganglia, wnereiz, mcaj, lrupp
looks a bit too formal and might scare away readers.
What about
If you first want to know more about the status, read on what the openSUSE Heroes discussed in their first meeting on 2016-06-26 (Participants: cboltz, orangecms, adalovelace, ganglia, wnereiz, mcaj, lrupp)
Good idea - done.
The "Topics:" overview looks superfluous to me - this is a blog post, not a book ;-)
removed
In the "lrupp offered the following" section, you should add a bullet point saying The new hardware will be hosted in the Provo data center because we have rack space and bandwidth available there.
done.
In the last item in the "Provo" section: a long term goal is to make the english openSUSE wiki usable as “commons” ___, so ... (drop the first "again" because we never had a "commons" before)
ok
Also, the headlines need some change. The easiest way is probably: - change "1. Provo" to "Current situation" or "Current situation with Provo admins" (something like that as long as it isn't only "Provo") - add another headline above "So the team wants". That headline could be "Plans, tasks and solutions" - the "Organization and Communication" headline looks good (but I'd drop the number in front of it)
done
Oh, and you should include a direct link to the "Provo" project on progress.o.o. The tickets there are public and a nice way to show what we are doing and where help is welcome.
done
Can you send me the picture in the original format (I'd guess GIMP xcf)? I can make it scalable (by converting it to SVG) so that we can use it everywhere without loosing quality.
might do - but I guess it's better to use git for this? Just tell me where we should host that stuff ... With kind regards, Lars -- To unsubscribe, e-mail: heroes+unsubscribe@opensuse.org To contact the owner, e-mail: heroes+owner@opensuse.org