I like the changes you made. I modified it a bit and checked it into the wiki page. I
also refactored the original paragraph with this material and put it under a "Summary
Description". We may just delete it later, but I left it there for now, with the
idea that we may want a short description that fits onto a presentation slide.
>> On 1/19/2011 at 09:44 AM, in message
Klaas Freitag <freitag(a)suse.de>
Posted on the wiki is a paragraph describing the
purpose of the Foundation.
I had the same idea and was sending in a proposal last week, see here:
Seems that I had been pretty alone on the list at that point of time ;-)
I used the existing Wiki text and tried to enhance it a bit keeping
its original idea.
Here are my thoughts:
- 1st paragraph:
I think the openSUSE Project covers more than 'just' a distro. It is
the most currently, but that might change, and other activities such
as promoting free content for example should also be mentioned.
- 2nd paragraph:
I tried to be more accurate when it comes to trademarks.
- 3rd paragraph:
is about membership, again with a bit more accuracy.
- 4th paragraph:
actual purpose of the foundation, not sure if that says enough already.
- 5th paragraph:
The meaning of the Guiding Principles.
I am not claiming that this is a better or complete text. It's just a
proposal to line up some more details which should give a better
guidance for our discussion here.
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