Cool! Lot's of feedback. It is great for me to have feedback and editors because I haven't written as much lately (usually I'm the editor) and I can never look as critically at my own work as I can at others' work. Also this is a somewhat technical topic and my method might not be the best way to do it. It seems to have worked okay on my systems at home, but I have this fear that someone will find a huge security bug in it and I'd hate to be offering this as a good way to do it if it were actually dangerous. ;-)
I'm not sure what exactly was meant under "make System Administration a part" My guess would be something like this: System Administration (book or part of the book) Network Configuration (chapter) Home Network (subchapter) Network with Router Network with Local Server (your article) Is this what you meant.
Right. Toms can probably explain parts better than I can but that is basically it. A part is a bigger chunk than a chapter but smaller than a book. The internally-produced manuals have parts in them. Right now System Administration is a chapter and my text is a sect1. But System Administration is a pretty broad topic, so this could easily turn into a huge and unmanageable chapter depending on how many other topics are added. It is a bit hard to make a good structure when we don't know exactly what the content will be in the long run. Right now if each text is made as a sect1, they are pretty mobile. But we probably want to get a better idea soon of what we expect so we can work out a good structure and set it up so authors can contribute more comfortably.
BTW, how to give comments on used words. I've seen "stipulated by your ISP" and mostly is used "provided", instead.
You just tell me what you think. ;-) You're right, stipulated isn't the best wording. How about assigned? Thanks! Rebecca --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: opensuse-doc+unsubscribe@opensuse.org For additional commands, e-mail: opensuse-doc+help@opensuse.org