http://bugzilla.novell.com/show_bug.cgi?id=542436
User carlos.e.r@opensuse.org added comment
http://bugzilla.novell.com/show_bug.cgi?id=542436#c5
Carlos Robinson
This sentence is mine and it means that no user is logged to backend. But I am not sure when this could happen as it is error from backend which is then reported to user. So I think that final sentence could be something such as "A user is not longer logged to target machine (I think rest service of target machine, but I don't want to be much technical). Please log in."
I welcome any ideas how to improve English sentences to be more understandable. So is sentence which I write above without parenthesis better?
My first language is not English, so I'm not the best qualified to answer our question. But yes, I think the sentence you propose is better. -- Configure bugmail: http://bugzilla.novell.com/userprefs.cgi?tab=email ------- You are receiving this mail because: ------- You are on the CC list for the bug.