Hello, Am Dienstag, 9. Februar 2016, 11:57:33 CET schrieb ddemaio:
The original file was really jacked up pretty bad. I made the recommended changes. Please take a look and let me know what you think.
"sponsorship highlights" section:
"Special will be offer due to sponsorship level" causes a parser failure
in my brain - please re-phrase that sentence ;-)
Also, it's not clear to which sponsorship level the items belong
"As a sponsor, you:"
The second and third lines in the bullet list should be intented.
Also, the line lenght should match the "Great Reasons..." section.
"Why become a Sponsor?"
The second lines in the bullet list should be intented.
"Partners"
In the last paragraph, something looks strange in "we look forward". It
seems there are some additional letters printed over the 'd' of
'forward'.
That said - in general, the sponsorship brochure looks good :-)
Regards,
Christian Boltz
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So feel free to add Skimmed-by: Seth Arnold