Author: emap Date: Fri Nov 4 16:32:13 2011 New Revision: 66706 URL: http://svn.opensuse.org/viewcvs/yast?rev=66706&view=rev Log: edited by emap Modified: trunk/autoinstallation/doc/xml/appendix2.xml Modified: trunk/autoinstallation/doc/xml/appendix2.xml URL: http://svn.opensuse.org/viewcvs/yast/trunk/autoinstallation/doc/xml/appendix2.xml?rev=66706&r1=66705&r2=66706&view=diff ============================================================================== --- trunk/autoinstallation/doc/xml/appendix2.xml (original) +++ trunk/autoinstallation/doc/xml/appendix2.xml Fri Nov 4 16:32:13 2011 @@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ can be used to dynamically generate Etherboot ROM images. </para> - <para>To create a boot floppy on a Linux system, as root, use the following command line:</para> + <para>To create a boot floppy on a Linux system, as root, use the following command line:</para><remark>emap 2011-11-04: Add the command.</remark> @@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ <title>Collecting MAC Addresses</title> <para> - To configure multiple clients (i.e. when configuring a cluster), it is required to have the Ethernet MAC address + To configure multiple clients (i.e. when configuring a cluster), you will need the Ethernet MAC address of every node in your cluster. </para> @@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ 00:50 (only an example). </para> <para>Alternativly, you can find the MAC address in the system log - files where you are running a &dhcp; server, for example:</para> + files where you are running a &dhcp; server,<remark>emap 2011-11-04: Should this read: in the system log files of your &dhcp; server?</remark> for example:</para> <screen> Feb 27 00:43:22 avicenna dhcpd: DHCPDISCOVER from 00:50:ba:3f:b5:d5 via eth0 @@ -68,4 +68,4 @@ mode: xml sgml-parent-document: ("autoyast2.xml" "book" "appendix") End: - --> \ No newline at end of file + --> -- To unsubscribe, e-mail: yast-commit+unsubscribe@opensuse.org For additional commands, e-mail: yast-commit+help@opensuse.org