Author: keichwa Date: Wed Aug 8 16:26:45 2007 New Revision: 40101 URL: http://svn.opensuse.org/viewcvs/yast?rev=40101&view=rev Log: improve terminology; see #298424 Modified: trunk/slide-show/SuSELinux/slideshow.xml Modified: trunk/slide-show/SuSELinux/slideshow.xml URL: http://svn.opensuse.org/viewcvs/yast/trunk/slide-show/SuSELinux/slideshow.xml?rev=40101&r1=40100&r2=40101&view=diff ============================================================================== --- trunk/slide-show/SuSELinux/slideshow.xml (original) +++ trunk/slide-show/SuSELinux/slideshow.xml Wed Aug 8 16:26:45 2007 @@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ <title>openSUSE.org</title> <para> -Created by the openSUSE.org project and sponsored by Novell, openSUSE is +Created by the openSUSE project and sponsored by Novell, openSUSE is a community effort to deliver the world's most usable open source computing platform. Many individuals are involved in packaging software, testing programs, writing documentation and localizing components for @@ -89,13 +89,13 @@ <title>Documents, Spreadsheets and More</title> <para> -The openSUSE &suse-version; project comes complete with the latest version of -the leading Linux productivity suite, OpenOffice.org. It features a word -processor, spreadsheet application, HTML editor, presentation designer -and database manager. It also reads and writes multiple file extensions -so you can move back and forth easily between openSUSE and popular -non-Linux productivity software. OpenOffice.org is the perfect choice -for reports, papers, home budgets, simple graphics and more.</para> +The openSUSE &suse-version; distribution comes complete with the latest version +of the leading Linux productivity suite, OpenOffice.org. It features a word +processor, spreadsheet application, HTML editor, presentation designer and +database manager. It also reads and writes multiple file extensions so you can +move back and forth easily between openSUSE and popular non-Linux productivity +software. OpenOffice.org is the perfect choice for reports, papers, home +budgets, simple graphics and more.</para> </section> <section label="06_graphics"> -- To unsubscribe, e-mail: yast-commit+unsubscribe@opensuse.org For additional commands, e-mail: yast-commit+help@opensuse.org