https://bugzilla.novell.com/show_bug.cgi?id=696425
https://bugzilla.novell.com/show_bug.cgi?id=696425#c7
Christian Boltz changed:
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--- Comment #7 from Christian Boltz 2011-05-30 21:47:33 CEST ---
Minor nitpicking:
(from the diff)
+ What you are installing is Factory, the future openSUSE version,
+ not the stable present one. If you know this, thank for your help
I'd change the first line to
You are installing Factory, the future openSUSE version,
(remove "What" and "is")
The second line should have "thank_s_" (the s is missing).
Besides that: the text looks good and much more friendly now :-)
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