Hello, Am Donnerstag, 11. Februar 2016, 17:03:20 CET schrieb James Mason:
Great feedback. How is this? v/r Doug
Much improved, but I'm still noticing a few issues:
James already found most issues in the new version. Some additional details: In the "Sponsorship Highlights" section, James already mentioned that the first bullet point contains "conference" twice. I'd also like to mention that it should be "Conference" with uppercase C. It's still not clear which of the sponsorship highlights are connected to which sponsorship level - is that intentional? After the "As a sponsor, you:" headline, there should be some free space, so that the distance between the headline and the first bullet point is at least the same as between the bullet points. There should also be some free space above the "Sponsorship Opportunities" box. Feel free to reduce the distance between the bullet points in that area to keep the whitespace at the bottom of the page. The second bullet point seems to include a double space: "and interested____in information technology" On the second page, some whitespace above the "Why Become a Sponsor" headline would be nice. Just move the content below that headline down, there's enough space left ;-) Regards, Christian Boltz -- Just my 0.04 € (adjusted for inflation) [Joachim Schrod in opensuse-factory] -- To unsubscribe, e-mail: opensuse-project+unsubscribe@opensuse.org To contact the owner, email: opensuse-project+owner@opensuse.org