Hello,
Am Donnerstag, 11. Februar 2016, 17:03:20 CET schrieb James Mason:
Great feedback. How is this? v/r Doug Much improved, but I'm still noticing a few issues: James already found most issues in the new version.
Some additional details:
In the "Sponsorship Highlights" section, James already mentioned that the first bullet point contains "conference" twice. I'd also like to mention that it should be "Conference" with uppercase C.
It's still not clear which of the sponsorship highlights are connected to which sponsorship level - is that intentional? Yes, the sponsorship levels are basically upon the sponsor to agree to
On 02/11/2016 10:11 PM, Christian Boltz wrote: the terms.
After the "As a sponsor, you:" headline, there should be some free space, so that the distance between the headline and the first bullet point is at least the same as between the bullet points. There should also be some free space above the "Sponsorship Opportunities" box.
Feel free to reduce the distance between the bullet points in that area to keep the whitespace at the bottom of the page.
The second bullet point seems to include a double space: "and interested____in information technology"
On the second page, some whitespace above the "Why Become a Sponsor" headline would be nice. Just move the content below that headline down, there's enough space left ;-)
Regards,
Christian Boltz
Ok, I made the suggested changes. Please let me know if there is anything else. v/r doug