[opensuse-marketing] Review news article
Seems like Jos already had an article readily published, please have a look at it and if its ready to be published I or anyone else can do it. http://news.opensuse.org/?p=13300&preview=true -- Regards Manu Gupta -- To unsubscribe, e-mail: opensuse-marketing+unsubscribe@opensuse.org To contact the owner, e-mail: opensuse-marketing+owner@opensuse.org
On Tue, 2012-06-05 at 23:02 +0530, Manu Gupta wrote:
Seems like Jos already had an article readily published, please have a look at it and if its ready to be published I or anyone else can do it.
Looks good to me, but I would rewrite the first sentence to say
After a few delayed milestones, the fourth even got canceled since there have been quite a number of disruptive changes in our Factory development distribution, but we’re starting to settle down and announce the availability of Beta 1 today!
instead of
After a few delayed milestones, the fourth even got canceled – there has been quite a number of disruptive changes in our Factor development distribution! But we’re starting to settle down and announce the availability of Beta 1 today!
-- Marcel Kühlhorn freenode: tux93 Have a lot of fun!
-----BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE----- Hash: SHA1 On 06/05/2012 07:32 PM, Manu Gupta wrote:
Seems like Jos already had an article readily published, please have a look at it and if its ready to be published I or anyone else can do it.
you could mention directly in the article the many segfaults in everything package-management related (zypper, yast -i, apper) because there are already a dozen duplicate bugs and it would not be worth wasting more time reporting them. and typos: stepps => steps VMware VM’s => VMware VMs Ciao Bernhard M. -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v2.0.18 (GNU/Linux) Comment: Using GnuPG with Mozilla - http://enigmail.mozdev.org/ iEYEARECAAYFAk/PC90ACgkQSTYLOx37oWTcRACgrRRwCq/D0kIM/Y2IoxQWMImE vKUAoIjtYhz1y/Vw9mNh/nqL/IzRT6+M =6YOP -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- -- To unsubscribe, e-mail: opensuse-marketing+unsubscribe@opensuse.org To contact the owner, e-mail: opensuse-marketing+owner@opensuse.org
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