Am Freitag, 20. April 2012, 10:48:01 schrieb Denis Leslie:
On Thursday 19 Apr 2012 16:12:49 Adrian Schröter wrote:
Hi,
I drafted a very-very first version of our OBS 2.3 anouncement. If someone wants to improve it or fix my broken english it would be great.
Hi Adrian,
As a native English speaker, I checked over your announcement and made a few minor tweaks to the (already very good) language. I also had to add some <p> tags to have it format right in my Konqueror display - you may want to remove those again. Here is the modified file:
Thanks!, I took your version. (Sorry for this messy way to distribute this text, but I dunno a better one atm). bye adrian -- Adrian Schroeter SUSE Linux Products GmbH email: adrian@suse.de -- To unsubscribe, e-mail: opensuse-marketing+unsubscribe@opensuse.org To contact the owner, e-mail: opensuse-marketing+owner@opensuse.org