On 08/12/2011 08:49 AM, Henne Vogelsang wrote:
Hey,
On 12.08.2011 14:43, Robert Schweikert wrote:
On 08/11/2011 10:06 AM, Henne Vogelsang wrote:
I've spend the last couple of hours whipping the general announcement together. Please review and tell me my countless spelling errors and if you miss anything :)
OK, here it goes:
Suggest alternate intro as follows:
Could you give me a reason why you suggest a completely different text?
The text, as written, is an obvious translation from German to English, including sentence structure, wording etc. The suggested text is easier to read.
:) I don't see any content-related changes, just formulation. Or did I miss something?
Correct, the changes are editorial only. I had no intention in modifying the content as it expresses the information we should convey. Later, Robert -- Robert Schweikert MAY THE SOURCE BE WITH YOU SUSE-IBM Software Integration Center LINUX Tech Lead rjschwei@suse.com rschweik@ca.ibm.com 781-464-8147 -- To unsubscribe, e-mail: opensuse-conference+unsubscribe@opensuse.org For additional commands, e-mail: opensuse-conference+help@opensuse.org