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Re: [opensuse-conference] Re: article about oSC sessions!


Andy (anditosan)

On Jun 6, 2013, at 7:00 AM, Jos Poortvliet <jos@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:

On Wednesday 05 June 2013 18:33:45 Jos Poortvliet wrote:
<snip>

Ok, scrap that, had a chat with Andi and we decided that it is probably
best to listen to Henne. That usually turns out to be the best thing to
do. So we'll focus on ONE main talk from each of the categories. I'll do
Community&Project as I already started, and write about the subject Henne
proposed: the talk about openSUSE Statistics.

W.I.P.:
https://news.opensuse.org/?p=16081&preview=true

Looks like I just send an empty mail, sorry about that.

A new attempt:

Andy, awesome work on writing the 2nd section. I did some rewording, mostly
to shorten things, also in my own section. Stuff like this:
The goal of the Community and Project track is to gather talks ...
Into:
The Community and Project track gathers talks ...
(that's an edit I did in my own part, yes)

Sometimes, you can remove entire sentences by adding 2 words to the next or
previous one that way: you say the same thing, just with less words. The art
of keeping it short ;-)

Anyway. I think the Geeko Tech part is fine too, only the part about Henne's
workshop could be expanded upon. I hope he could have a look himself?

Otherwise, are you up for giving the Open World part a go?

Yes, I can do it although there is a lot of talk subjects there. I will try to
highlight some, not all, but I already started writing about open world :)



Note that I put the article on your name because, if you do the Open World
part, you did 2/3 of the work so it would be unfair to not credit the article
to you :D

Thanks,
/J

/J
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