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updates asked by Robert
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2013/2/13 Robert Schweikert
Hi,
On 02/13/2013 02:31 PM, Carlos Ribeiro wrote:
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My suggestions:
- Make the sponsorship amount not stand out + We want people to focus on what they get an not on how much it costs. It is much easier to convince someone to give you money when they are already convinced about the benefits, thus lets put the price at the end of each category. + The free stuff can stay as is as the "free" part id the most important aspect.
- Have Gold, Silver, and Bronze packages in the left hand column and the two "Free" items in the right hand column. done
- Can you tone down the bullet markers? The first few words of each bullet are hard to read due to the changing contrast as the bullet marker turns into background for the text.
done
- For bullets that span multiple line, the second and subsequent lines should be indented by at least 2 spaces
done
- The inserted "Are" for the tickets, completely changes the sentence such that it no longer works. We can keep the emphasis on the tickets, but you still need a comma at the end and the "Are" needs to be removed.
done
- Also the two column layout at the end of the first page does not really work for me as the text that is associated with contacting Izabel slips under the column that talks about the tickets.
done
- The "This year, the openSUSE conference...." paragraph MUST be logically after the "The openSUSE conference is an annual event..."
done
+ It is mor important for potential sponsors to learn about the event first than to find out where it happens to take place this year.
Later,
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