On Mon, 2011-01-03 at 09:13 -0500, Chuck Payne wrote:

On Mon, Jan 3, 2011 at 8:57 AM, Manu Gupta wrote:

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Hi All,

Please have a look at it http://suseware.com/trial/extended.php

The text is down below in the page.. I would like everyone to improvise upon the text or give comments

Regards Manu

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Looks good, do we have openSUSE 11.3 boxse that you can replace the 11.2 with?

This will be eventually be replaced by a slideshow I am working on it

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On Mon, 2011-01-03 at 14:42 -0500, Ricardo Chung wrote:

El lun, 03-01-2011 a las 19:45 +0530, Manu Gupta escribió:

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On Mon, 2011-01-03 at 09:13 -0500, Chuck Payne wrote:

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On Mon, Jan 3, 2011 at 8:57 AM, Manu Gupta wrote:

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Hi All,

Please have a look at it http://suseware.com/trial/extended.php

The text is down below in the page.. I would like everyone to improvise upon the text or give comments

Regards Manu

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Looks good, do we have openSUSE 11.3 boxse that you can replace the 11.2 with?

This will be eventually be replaced by a slideshow I am working on it

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It looks good. Maybe it only needs some text alignment

The text was already justified but it did not look nice because of the bullet points. Looks better in my opinion

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On Tue, 2011-01-04 at 14:27 +0530, Koushik Kumar Nundy wrote:

On 3 January 2011 19:27, Manu Gupta wrote:

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Hi All,

Please have a look at it http://suseware.com/trial/extended.php

Very well done. Beautifully in sync with the rest of the site.

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The text is down below in the page.. I would like everyone to improvise upon the text or give comments

Typo on "About Us" line 6. beter - better.

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Regards Manu

The image size is a bit unsuitable for lower resolution screens. Just to see the 11.2 box completely on a 1024x600 or thereabout screen would require quite some scrolling. A FF 3.6 window with one toolbar needs 1012*715 on openSUSE 11.2 and 990*710 on winXP to display the top part correctly without scrolling.

Usage of the term "sane defaults", while true, seems a bit confusing. Insane controls are actually often desired. "Reasonable controls" or something softer would seem more comforting maybe?

I removed the phrase sane controls.. looks good to me.

Thanks, ~kknundy.

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