I made some reasonable progress with the text today, organized them so they are in the order of the examples as posted by Gnokki, with headline, topic (for reference) and text below.
If someone could write something about Factory please? I'm clueless about that. Also Gnokii I wasn't sure what the topic of the people one was, I thought 'international' but not sure.
Also, I'm not too sure about a couple of the last images.
I also need someone to check the Yast text, it's not quite complete and I'm not sure what else to say abou that.
Some of the texts might seem a bit too short, in terms of not saying enough about the features, but we do need to keep them fairly brief I think.
If you think I need to talk about something else, please add it and I'll try to work it in.
Also please comment if you think any of the phrases need improvement, suggest alternatives, or if facts need correcting!
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thanks
Helen
Am Freitag 17 Dezember 2010, 05:35:57 schrieb Helen:
I made some reasonable progress with the text today, organized them so they are in the order of the examples as posted by Gnokki, with headline, topic (for reference) and text below.
If someone could write something about Factory please? I'm clueless about that.
Also Gnokii I wasn't sure what the topic of the people one was, I thought 'international' but not sure.
ooh I know it, that one where one the text exists. "You are never be alone" But can be overwritten.
Also, I'm not too sure about a couple of the last images.
I also need someone to check the Yast text, it's not quite complete and I'm not sure what else to say abou that.
Some of the texts might seem a bit too short, in terms of not saying enough about the features, but we do need to keep them fairly brief I think.
If you think I need to talk about something else, please add it and I'll try to work it in.
Also please comment if you think any of the phrases need improvement, suggest alternatives, or if facts need correcting!
hope are saved, looks piratpad make a break for the service.
http://piratepad.net/VQM25U4GMy
thanks
Helen
On Friday 17 December 2010 05:35:57 Helen wrote:
I made some reasonable progress with the text today, organized them so they are in the order of the examples as posted by Gnokki, with headline, topic (for reference) and text below.
If someone could write something about Factory please? I'm clueless about that. Also Gnokii I wasn't sure what the topic of the people one was, I thought 'international' but not sure.
Also, I'm not too sure about a couple of the last images.
I also need someone to check the Yast text, it's not quite complete and I'm not sure what else to say abou that.
Some of the texts might seem a bit too short, in terms of not saying enough about the features, but we do need to keep them fairly brief I think.
If you think I need to talk about something else, please add it and I'll try to work it in.
Also please comment if you think any of the phrases need improvement, suggest alternatives, or if facts need correcting!
Awesome work. The ones that are left are a bit difficult, I couldn't really add much. Anyone who wants to try, add any thoughts you have on the items on the bottom which have no text yet - any ideas could be helpful so don't be afraid to add whatever comes up in your mind :D
thanks
Helen
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