Ah, sorry - I misread.
Still, I would definitely remove this bit:
", and is possibly preferable for users of Tumbleweed."
>From a writing style perspective, it is problematic. Even if you remove the
weasel word "possibly", it is not a true statement. Running open-source drivers
only is only preferable for users who never use their laptop to play games. And
judging from the comments on my blog, this is not most people!