Mailinglist Archive: yast-commit (322 mails)

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Author: emap
Date: Sat Nov  5 12:04:41 2011
New Revision: 66714

URL: http://svn.opensuse.org/viewcvs/yast?rev=66714&view=rev
Log:
edited by emap

Modified:
    trunk/autoinstallation/doc/xml/ReportSection.xml

Modified: trunk/autoinstallation/doc/xml/ReportSection.xml
URL: 
http://svn.opensuse.org/viewcvs/yast/trunk/autoinstallation/doc/xml/ReportSection.xml?rev=66714&r1=66713&r2=66714&view=diff
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--- trunk/autoinstallation/doc/xml/ReportSection.xml (original)
+++ trunk/autoinstallation/doc/xml/ReportSection.xml Sat Nov  5 12:04:41 2011
@@ -23,23 +23,23 @@
     </title>     
 
     <para>
-      The <emphasis>report</emphasis> resource manages 3 types of pop-ups
-      that may appear during installation.
+      The <emphasis>report</emphasis> resource manages three types of popups
+      that may appear during installation:
     </para>
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
        <para>
-         Messages Popups (Usually non-critical, informative messages)
+         message popups (usually non-critical, informative messages),
        </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
        <para>
-         Warning Popups (If something might go wrong)
+         warning popups (if something might go wrong),
        </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
        <para>
-         Error Popups (In the case of an error)
+         error popups (in case an error occurs).
        </para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
@@ -58,17 +58,17 @@
     some places but should not be ignored.
   </para>
   <para>
-    By default, the settings in auto-installation mode is to show all messages 
without logging and
+    The default setting in auto-installation mode is to show all messages 
without logging and
     with a timeout of 10 seconds.
   </para>
     <warning>
       <title>
-       Critical system messages
+       Critical System Messages
       </title>
       <para>
        Note that <emphasis>not</emphasis> all messages during installation are 
controlled by the
        <emphasis>report</emphasis> resource. Some critical messages concerning
-       package installation and partitioning will still show up ignoring your
+       package installation and partitioning will show up ignoring your
        settings in the <emphasis>report</emphasis> section. Mostly those
        messages will have to be answered with <emphasis>Yes</emphasis> or 
<emphasis>No</emphasis>.
       </para>

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