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[yast-commit] r43680 - in /branches/SuSE-SLE-10-SP2-Branch/kdump/src: Kdump.ycp dialogs.ycp helps.ycp kdump.ycp uifunctions.ycp
  • From: juhliarik@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
  • Date: Wed, 16 Jan 2008 16:39:41 -0000
  • Message-id: <20080116163941.5602F33C87@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
Author: juhliarik
Date: Wed Jan 16 17:39:40 2008
New Revision: 43680

URL: http://svn.opensuse.org/viewcvs/yast?rev=43680&view=rev
Log:
added proofreaded text


Modified:
branches/SuSE-SLE-10-SP2-Branch/kdump/src/Kdump.ycp
branches/SuSE-SLE-10-SP2-Branch/kdump/src/dialogs.ycp
branches/SuSE-SLE-10-SP2-Branch/kdump/src/helps.ycp
branches/SuSE-SLE-10-SP2-Branch/kdump/src/kdump.ycp
branches/SuSE-SLE-10-SP2-Branch/kdump/src/uifunctions.ycp

Modified: branches/SuSE-SLE-10-SP2-Branch/kdump/src/Kdump.ycp
URL:
http://svn.opensuse.org/viewcvs/yast/branches/SuSE-SLE-10-SP2-Branch/kdump/src/Kdump.ycp?rev=43680&r1=43679&r2=43680&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- branches/SuSE-SLE-10-SP2-Branch/kdump/src/Kdump.ycp (original)
+++ branches/SuSE-SLE-10-SP2-Branch/kdump/src/Kdump.ycp Wed Jan 16 17:39:40 2008
@@ -590,7 +590,7 @@
//Popup::Message(crash_value);
y2milestone("[kdump] (WriteKdumpBootParameter) adding chrashkernel
option with value : %1", crash_value);
if (!Mode::commandline())
- Popup::Message(_("For applying changes is necessary reboot."));
+ Popup::Message(_("To apply changes a reboot is necessary."));

Service::Enable("kdump");
return result;
@@ -610,7 +610,7 @@
Bootloader::Write();
Progress::set (old_progress);
if (!Mode::commandline())
- Popup::Message(_("For applying changes is necessary reboot."));
+ Popup::Message(_("To apply changes a reboot is necessary."));
}
Service::Disable("kdump");
if (Service::Status("kdump") == 0)
@@ -635,13 +635,13 @@

Progress::New( caption, " ", steps, [
/* Progress stage 1/4 */
- _("Read the config file"),
+ _("Reading the config file..."),
/* Progress stage 2/4 */
- _("Read disk partitions"),
+ _("Reading disk partitions..."),
/* Progress stage 3/4 */
- _("Read kernel boot options"),
+ _("Reading kernel boot options..."),
/* Progress stage 4/4 */
- _("Read available memory"),
+ _("Reading available memory..."),

], [
/* Progress step 1/4 */
@@ -675,14 +675,14 @@
if(Abort()) return false;
Progress::NextStep();
/* Error message */
- if(!ReadKdumpKernelParam ()) Report::Error(_("Cannot read kernel boot
options"));
+ if(!ReadKdumpKernelParam ()) Report::Error(_("Cannot read kernel boot
options."));
//sleep(sl);

// read another database
if(Abort()) return false;
Progress::NextStep();
/* Error message */
- if(!ReadAvailableMemory ()) Report::Error(_("Cannot read available
memory"));
+ if(!ReadAvailableMemory ()) Report::Error(_("Cannot read available
memory."));
//sleep(sl);

if(Abort()) return false;

Modified: branches/SuSE-SLE-10-SP2-Branch/kdump/src/dialogs.ycp
URL:
http://svn.opensuse.org/viewcvs/yast/branches/SuSE-SLE-10-SP2-Branch/kdump/src/dialogs.ycp?rev=43680&r1=43679&r2=43680&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- branches/SuSE-SLE-10-SP2-Branch/kdump/src/dialogs.ycp (original)
+++ branches/SuSE-SLE-10-SP2-Branch/kdump/src/dialogs.ycp Wed Jan 16 17:39:40
2008
@@ -220,7 +220,7 @@

"RunLevel" : $[
//TRANSLATORS: ComboBox Label
- "label" : _("&The Run-level to Boot the Kdump Kernel"),
+ "label" : _("&The Runlevel to Boot the Kdump Kernel"),
"widget" : `combobox,
"items" : [
[ "run_level1", _("1 - Single User Mode") ],
@@ -332,7 +332,7 @@
`Left("KdumpCommandLineAppend")
))),
`VSpacing(1),
- `Frame ( _("The Run-level to Boot"),`HBox(`HSpacing(1),`VBox(
+ `Frame ( _("The Runlevel to Boot"),`HBox(`HSpacing(1),`VBox(
`Left(`HBox(
`Left("RunLevel"),
`VBox(

Modified: branches/SuSE-SLE-10-SP2-Branch/kdump/src/helps.ycp
URL:
http://svn.opensuse.org/viewcvs/yast/branches/SuSE-SLE-10-SP2-Branch/kdump/src/helps.ycp?rev=43680&r1=43679&r2=43680&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- branches/SuSE-SLE-10-SP2-Branch/kdump/src/helps.ycp (original)
+++ branches/SuSE-SLE-10-SP2-Branch/kdump/src/helps.ycp Wed Jan 16 17:39:40 2008
@@ -39,12 +39,14 @@
/*Enable/Disable Kdump - RadioButtons 1/1*/
"StartRadioBut" : _("<p><b>Enable/Disable Kdump</b><br>
Enable or disable kdump. The boot option crashkernel parameter is
added/removed.
- For applying changes is necessary reboot.<br></p>"),
+ To apply changes a reboot is necessary.<br></p>
+"),


/* Kdump Memor&y [MB] - IntField 1/1*/
"KdumpMemory" : _("<p><b>Kdump Memory</b><br>
- Alocating of memory for kdump kernel. <br></p>"),
+ Allocation of memory for kdump kernel. <br></p>
+"),

/* Kdump Memor&y [MB] - IntField 1/1*/
"DumpLevel" : _("<p><b>Dump Level</b><br>
@@ -94,9 +96,10 @@
/* Enable Raw Saving in Initrd - ComboBox 1/1*/
"RawPartitions": _("<p><b>Enable Raw Saving in Initrd</b> - allows to save
the dump in initrd before mounting any filesystem. Then the system is
rebooted, and
- if filesystem doesn't mount user can repair it with a rescue system. On
first normal
- boot, the dump is saved to the final dump destination. It is possible
select raw partition
- from <i>The List of Available Raw Paritions of All Disks Without Known
Filesystem</i><br></p>"),
+ if the filesystem does not mount, the user can repair it with a rescue
system. On the first normal
+ boot, the dump is saved to the final dump destination. It is possible to
select raw partition
+ from <i>The List of Available Raw Paritions of All Disks Without Known
Filesystem</i><br>.</p>
+"),

/* Custom Kdump Kernel - TextEntry 1/1*/
"InitrdKernel":_("<p><b>Custom Kdump Kernel</b> The user can enter the
custom kernel.
@@ -110,13 +113,15 @@
/* Kdump Command Line Append - TextEntry 1/1*/
"KdumpCommandLineAppend" : _("<p><b>Kdump Command Line Append</b>
Set this option means _append_ values to the default command line string.
- The string gets also appended if <i>Kdump Command Line</i>
- is set. <br></p>"),
+ The string will be appended if the <i>Kdump Command Line</i>
+ is set. <br></p>
+"),

/* The Run-level to Boot the Kdump Kernel - ComboBox 1/1*/
- "RunLevel" : _("<p><b>The Run-level to Boot the Kdump Kernel</b> -
- The run-level to boot the kdump kernel. If networks is needed in
- the kdump environment, set <i>3</i>.<br></p>"),
+ "RunLevel" : _("<p><b>The Runlevel to Boot the Kdump Kernel</b> -
+ The runlevel to boot the kdump kernel. If networks are needed in
+ the kdump environment, set <i>3</i>.<br></p>
+"),

/* Enable Immediate Reboot After Saving the Core - CheckBox 1/1*/
"EnableReboot" : _("<p><b>Enable Immediate Reboot After Saving the Core</b>
-
@@ -162,7 +167,7 @@
/* Summary dialog help 2/3 */
_("<p><b><big>Adding a Kdump:</big></b><br>
Choose an kdump from the list of detected kdumps.
-If your kdump was not detected, use <b>Other (not detected)</b>.
+If your kdump was not detected, select <b>Other (not detected)</b>.
Then press <b>Configure</b>.</p>
") +


Modified: branches/SuSE-SLE-10-SP2-Branch/kdump/src/kdump.ycp
URL:
http://svn.opensuse.org/viewcvs/yast/branches/SuSE-SLE-10-SP2-Branch/kdump/src/kdump.ycp?rev=43680&r1=43679&r2=43680&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- branches/SuSE-SLE-10-SP2-Branch/kdump/src/kdump.ycp (original)
+++ branches/SuSE-SLE-10-SP2-Branch/kdump/src/kdump.ycp Wed Jan 16 17:39:40 2008
@@ -66,11 +66,11 @@
//TRANSLATORS: CommandLine printed text
CommandLine::Print(_("Kdump is enabled (boot option \"crashkernel\" is
added)"));
//TRANSLATORS: CommandLine printed text
- CommandLine::Print(sformat(_("Alocate memory (MB) for kdump is: %1"),
Kdump::alocated_memory));
+ CommandLine::Print(sformat(_("Allocate memory (MB) for kdump is: %1"),
Kdump::alocated_memory));

} else {
//TRANSLATORS: CommandLine printed text
- CommandLine::Print(_("Kdump is disable"));
+ CommandLine::Print(_("Kdump is disabled"));
}
CommandLine::Print("");
//TRANSLATORS: CommandLine printed text
@@ -225,18 +225,18 @@
Kdump::add_crashkernel_param = true;
Kdump::alocated_memory = tostring(options["alloc_mem"]:nil);
//TRANSLATORS: CommandLine printed text
- CommandLine::Print(_("For applying changes is necessary reboot."));
+ CommandLine::Print(_("To apply changes a reboot is necessary."));
return true;

} else if (options["disable"]:nil!=nil) {
Kdump::add_crashkernel_param = false;
//TRANSLATORS: CommandLine printed text
- CommandLine::Print(_("For applying changes is necessary reboot."));
+ CommandLine::Print(_("To apply changes a reboot is necessary."));
return true;

} else {
// TRANSLATORS: CommandLine error message
- CommandLine::Error(_("Wrong options was used."));
+ CommandLine::Error(_("Wrong options were used."));
return false;
}

@@ -258,7 +258,7 @@
}
} else {
// TRANSLATORS: CommandLine error message
- CommandLine::Error(_("Wrong options was used."));
+ CommandLine::Error(_("Wrong options were used."));
return false;
}

@@ -281,7 +281,7 @@
}
} else {
// TRANSLATORS: CommandLine error message
- CommandLine::Error(_("Wrong options was used."));
+ CommandLine::Error(_("Wrong options were used."));
return false;
}

@@ -294,7 +294,7 @@
password = (string)SCR::Read(.target.string, path_file);
} else {
// TRANSLATORS: CommandLine error message
- CommandLine::Error(sformat(_("File %1 doesn't exist."),path_file));
+ CommandLine::Error(sformat(_("File %1 does not exist."),path_file));
}
return password;
}
@@ -449,7 +449,7 @@
return true;
} else {
// TRANSLATORS: CommandLine error message
- CommandLine::Error(_("Wrong options was used."));
+ CommandLine::Error(_("Wrong options were used."));
return false;
}

@@ -474,7 +474,7 @@

} else {
// TRANSLATORS: CommandLine error message
- CommandLine::Error(_("Wrong options was used."));
+ CommandLine::Error(_("Wrong options were used."));
return false;
}

@@ -489,7 +489,7 @@

} else {
// TRANSLATORS: CommandLine error message
- CommandLine::Error(_("Wrong options was used."));
+ CommandLine::Error(_("Wrong options were used."));
return false;
}

@@ -503,7 +503,7 @@

} else {
// TRANSLATORS: CommandLine error message
- CommandLine::Error(_("Wrong options was used."));
+ CommandLine::Error(_("Wrong options were used."));
return false;
}

@@ -517,7 +517,7 @@

} else {
// TRANSLATORS: CommandLine error message
- CommandLine::Error(_("Wrong options was used."));
+ CommandLine::Error(_("Wrong options were used."));
return false;
}

@@ -534,7 +534,7 @@

} else {
// TRANSLATORS: CommandLine error message
- CommandLine::Error(_("Wrong options was used."));
+ CommandLine::Error(_("Wrong options were used."));
return false;
}

@@ -556,7 +556,7 @@

} else {
// TRANSLATORS: CommandLine error message
- CommandLine::Error(_("Wrong options was used."));
+ CommandLine::Error(_("Wrong options were used."));
return false;
}

@@ -577,7 +577,7 @@

} else {
// TRANSLATORS: CommandLine error message
- CommandLine::Error(_("Wrong options was used."));
+ CommandLine::Error(_("Wrong options were used."));
return false;
}

@@ -657,7 +657,7 @@
"customkernel" : $[
"handler" : cmdKdumpCustomKernel,
// TRANSLATORS: CommandLine help
- "help" : _("The naming scheme
is:/boot/vmlinu[zx]-<kernel_string>[.gz] Please eneter only
\"kernel_string\"."),
+ "help" : _("The naming scheme
is:/boot/vmlinu[zx]-<kernel_string>[.gz] Please enter only \"kernel_string\"."),
"example" : [
"customkernel kernel=kdump",
],
@@ -694,7 +694,7 @@
"runlevel" : $[
"handler" : cmdKdumpRunLevel,
// TRANSLATORS: CommandLine help
- "help" : _("The run-level to boot the kdump kernel.(1,2,3,5,s)"),
+ "help" : _("The runlevel to boot the kdump kernel.(1,2,3,5,s)"),
"example" : [
"runlevel level=1",
],
@@ -724,7 +724,7 @@
"alloc_mem": $[
"type" : "integer",
// TRANSLATORS: CommandLine help
- "help" : _("Size of allocate memory MB"),
+ "help" : _("Size of allocated memory MB"),
],

"dump_level": $[
@@ -742,7 +742,7 @@
"target": $[
"type" : "string",
// TRANSLATORS: CommandLine help
- "help" : _("Dump target includes kind of target from: file
(local filesystem), ftp, ssh, nfs, cifs"),
+ "help" : _("Dump target includes type of target from: file
(local filesystem), ftp, ssh, nfs, cifs"),
],

"server": $[
@@ -760,7 +760,7 @@
"dir": $[
"type" : "string",
// TRANSLATORS: CommandLine help
- "help" : _("Directory for saving dumps images"),
+ "help" : _("Directory for saving dump images"),
],

"share": $[
@@ -778,7 +778,7 @@
"pass": $[
"type" : "string",
// TRANSLATORS: CommandLine help
- "help" : _("Path of file which includes passwort (plain text
file)"),
+ "help" : _("Path of file which includes password (plain text
file)"),
],

"raw": $[
@@ -803,7 +803,7 @@
"level": $[
"type" : "string",
// TRANSLATORS: CommandLine help
- "help" : _("Option means run-level to boot the kdump kernel.
Only values such as 1,2,3,5 or s are allowed"),
+ "help" : _("Option means runlevel to boot the kdump kernel.
Only values such as 1,2,3,5 or s are allowed"),
],

"no": $[

Modified: branches/SuSE-SLE-10-SP2-Branch/kdump/src/uifunctions.ycp
URL:
http://svn.opensuse.org/viewcvs/yast/branches/SuSE-SLE-10-SP2-Branch/kdump/src/uifunctions.ycp?rev=43680&r1=43679&r2=43680&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- branches/SuSE-SLE-10-SP2-Branch/kdump/src/uifunctions.ycp (original)
+++ branches/SuSE-SLE-10-SP2-Branch/kdump/src/uifunctions.ycp Wed Jan 16
17:39:40 2008
@@ -455,7 +455,7 @@
value = tostring(UI::QueryWidget(`id ("dir"), `Value));

if ((value == nil) || (value == "")) {
- Popup::Error(_("You need specify \"Directory for Saving Dumps\""));
+ Popup::Error(_("You need to specify \"Directory for Saving Dumps\""));
UI::SetFocus(`id("dir"));
return false;
}
@@ -464,14 +464,14 @@
value = tostring(UI::QueryWidget(`id ("server"), `Value));

if ((value == nil) || (value == "")) {
- Popup::Error(_("You need specify \"Server Name\""));
+ Popup::Error(_("You need to specify \"Server Name\""));
UI::SetFocus(`id("server"));
return false;
}
value = tostring(UI::QueryWidget(`id ("dir"), `Value));

if ((value == nil) || (value == "")) {
- Popup::Error(_("You need specify \"Directory on Server\""));
+ Popup::Error(_("You need to specify \"Directory on Server\""));
UI::SetFocus(`id("dir"));
return false;
}
@@ -481,7 +481,7 @@
value = tostring(UI::QueryWidget(`id ("user_name"), `Value));

if ((value == nil) || (value == "")) {
- Popup::Error(_("You need specify \"User Name\""));
+ Popup::Error(_("You need to specify \"User Name\""));
UI::SetFocus(`id("user_name"));
return false;
}
@@ -491,14 +491,14 @@
value = tostring(UI::QueryWidget(`id ("server"), `Value));

if ((value == nil) || (value == "")) {
- Popup::Error(_("You need specify \"Server Name\""));
+ Popup::Error(_("You need to specify \"Server Name\""));
UI::SetFocus(`id("server"));
return false;
}
value = tostring(UI::QueryWidget(`id ("dir"), `Value));

if ((value == nil) || (value == "")) {
- Popup::Error(_("You need specify \"Directory on Server\""));
+ Popup::Error(_("You need to specify \"Directory on Server\""));
UI::SetFocus(`id("dir"));
return false;
}
@@ -507,21 +507,21 @@
value = tostring(UI::QueryWidget(`id ("server"), `Value));

if ((value == nil) || (value == "")) {
- Popup::Error(_("You need specify \"Server Name\""));
+ Popup::Error(_("You need to specify \"Server Name\""));
UI::SetFocus(`id("server"));
return false;
}
value = tostring(UI::QueryWidget(`id ("dir"), `Value));

if ((value == nil) || (value == "")) {
- Popup::Error(_("You need specify \"Directory on Server\""));
+ Popup::Error(_("You need to specify \"Directory on Server\""));
UI::SetFocus(`id("dir"));
return false;
}
value = tostring(UI::QueryWidget(`id ("share"), `Value));

if ((value == nil) || (value == "")) {
- Popup::Error(_("You need specify \"Exported Share\""));
+ Popup::Error(_("You need to specify \"Exported Share\""));
UI::SetFocus(`id("share"));
return false;
}
@@ -531,7 +531,7 @@
value = tostring(UI::QueryWidget(`id ("user_name"), `Value));

if ((value == nil) || (value == "")) {
- Popup::Error(_("You need specify \"User Name\""));
+ Popup::Error(_("You need to specify \"User Name\""));
UI::SetFocus(`id("user_name"));
return false;
} //end of if ((value == nil) || (value == ""))
@@ -832,7 +832,7 @@
if ((value != nil) && (value != ""))
UI::ChangeWidget(`id("raw_partitions"), `Value, value);
else
- Popup::Error(_("Partition doesn't exist on your disks"));
+ Popup::Error(_("Partition does not exist on your disks"));
} else if (size(Kdump::uknown_fs_partitions)>0) {
UI::ChangeWidget(`id("raw_partitions"), `Items,
Kdump::uknown_fs_partitions); //uknown_fs_partitions);
//UI::ChangeWidget(`id("enable_raw_partitions"), `Value, false);

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