Mailinglist Archive: opensuse-project (95 mails)

["Francis Giannaros" <francisg@xxxxxxxxx>]

On 8/6/07, Cornelius Schumacher <cschum@xxxxxxx> wrote:
> On Monday 06 August 2007 16:42, Claes Bäckström wrote:
> >
> > --- snip ---
> >
> > We value...
> > -----------
> >
> > ... the ideals of free software: the freedoms to use, share, study and
> > modify, and share modified versions.
> >
> > --- snip ---
> >
> > Though I'm not native english speaking this sounds really strange to
> > me (or perhaps that's my problem :-) )
>
> Do you have a suggestion how to change it? I'm no native speaker either, so
> I'm not sure, how strange it really sounds.

Little peculiar because you have "x and y, and z". Having "freedoms to
use, share, study, modify and share modified versions." would be
better.

Kind thoughts,
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Francis Giannaros   http://francis.giannaros.org
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