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Re: [opensuse-project] Final draft for openSUSE Guiding Principles
- From: "Francis Giannaros" <francisg@xxxxxxxxx>
- Date: Mon, 6 Aug 2007 15:48:01 +0100
- Message-id: <94dc34e40708060748l4a96e824j9b39d66455f9678c@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
On 8/6/07, Cornelius Schumacher <cschum@xxxxxxx> wrote:
> We had a lot of good feedback on the first drafts of the openSUSE Guiding
> Principles, so we now have the feeling that we can move to a finalized
> version. Attached is the latest version, which incorporates the feedback on
> the 2nd draft. This is meant to be the final draft.
Looks great.
Three little things:
> ... a project for everybody striving for an open free software distribution
...requires some separation between the adjectives. So, either a comma
("open, free") or a conjunction ("open and free").
> It also allows to directly contribute to the
Need to specify who; i.e. "It also allows individuals to directly..."
> existing open source development processes and the corresponding decision making processes.
Minor, but the hyphenated "decision-making" word is to be preferred here.
Kind thoughts,
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Francis Giannaros http://francis.giannaros.org
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> We had a lot of good feedback on the first drafts of the openSUSE Guiding
> Principles, so we now have the feeling that we can move to a finalized
> version. Attached is the latest version, which incorporates the feedback on
> the 2nd draft. This is meant to be the final draft.
Looks great.
Three little things:
> ... a project for everybody striving for an open free software distribution
...requires some separation between the adjectives. So, either a comma
("open, free") or a conjunction ("open and free").
> It also allows to directly contribute to the
Need to specify who; i.e. "It also allows individuals to directly..."
> existing open source development processes and the corresponding decision making processes.
Minor, but the hyphenated "decision-making" word is to be preferred here.
Kind thoughts,
--
Francis Giannaros http://francis.giannaros.org
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