On Fri, 2012-05-18 at 14:23 +0200, Bruno Friedmann wrote:
On Thursday 17 May 2012 19.15:50 Lars Vogdt wrote:
Hi Marketing Team!
I know that 6 June 2012 is a long, long day in the future, but nevertheless, the preparation is going on and as we are already supporting IPv6 since a year now, I guess spending some marketing efforts in this area will give us an easy win.
I already added openSUSE and openSUSE-Education as IPv6 participants on the list of the Internet Society ( www.worldipv6launch.org/participants/ ) and now I also prepared some Newsletter for our users here: http://news.opensuse.org/?p=13372&preview=true
If someone finds the time to go through my ugly English there and maybe enhance the text with some additional information, I would really appreciate this.
I want to give the time for the release on news.opensuse.org in your hands - just find a suitable date and click on the button, Admins.
Thanks in advance, Lars
Thanks for your efforts Lars to promote the future of internet. And tell people that Geeko is ready for that.
As review I would said okay perhaps just removing capital on preferred Operating System operating system ...
I think this is okay to leave it capitalized. It is functioning as a Pronoun in this case rather than generic operating system. Couple of other minor edits: First sentence "As last year,... " should be "Like last year,..." As last year says that you *are* 2011. :-) Second paragraph "openSUSE shows again it’s readiness" change it's to its. Other than that, I think its good to go! :-) Bryen
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