Mailinglist Archive: opensuse-marketing (208 mails)

[Helen <postmodernhousewife@xxxxxxxxx>]

I made some reasonable progress with the text today, organized them so
they are in the order of the examples as posted by Gnokki, with
headline, topic (for reference) and text below.

If someone could write something about Factory please? I'm clueless
about that. Also Gnokii I wasn't sure what the topic of the people one
was, I thought 'international' but not sure.

Also, I'm not too sure about a couple of the last images.

I also need someone to check the Yast text, it's not quite complete
and I'm not sure what else to say abou that.

Some of the texts might seem a bit too short, in terms of not saying
enough about the features, but we do need to keep them fairly brief I
think.

 If you think I need to talk about something else, please add it and
I'll try to work it in.

Also please comment if you think any of the phrases need improvement,
suggest alternatives, or if facts need correcting!

http://piratepad.net/VQM25U4GMy

thanks

Helen
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