On Sunday 26 September 2010 17:23:01 Carlos Ribeiro wrote:
Jos,
Yes, we already did piratepad for the obs 2.1 draf for announcement, http://piratepad.net/VXa1B1xryD
Hi, I suggest to explain what obs is right at the beginning of the text - I've added a bit now but it does not fit in. Also: The new features you mention are all features from 2.0. I suggested to add these features in a prominent way: * enhanced web user interface: creation of submit requests; source history and showing of commits * Source services allow checkout from svn/git with tar up, download from remote sides * Read access control for package sources. I would mention also the install methods, the new installation media that installs OBS on a fresh system directly, the appliances, the public build.opensuse.org as well as OBS is an Open Source project I suggest to not use bullet points but instead announce three features and make a paragraph for each one. Could you rework this further, please? Feel free to catch me on IRC, Andreas -- Andreas Jaeger, Program Manager openSUSE, aj@{novell.com,opensuse.org} Twitter: jaegerandi | Identica: jaegerandi SUSE LINUX Products GmbH, GF: Markus Rex, HRB 16746 (AG Nürnberg) Maxfeldstr. 5, 90409 Nürnberg, Germany GPG fingerprint = 93A3 365E CE47 B889 DF7F FED1 389A 563C C272 A126 -- To unsubscribe, e-mail: opensuse-marketing+unsubscribe@opensuse.org For additional commands, e-mail: opensuse-marketing+help@opensuse.org