On Fri, Jul 16, 2010 at 3:05 PM, Henne Vogelsang
Hey Jigish,
On 16.07.2010 06:13, Jigish Gohil wrote:
Please find the draft of release announcement of the upcoming Li-f-e here: http://wiki.opensuse.org/Education/Release_Draft
I think in the text you need to seperate the 3 big topics you have (Educational software, Graphic/Office and Developer) more. Make each one a separate paragraph. Also you started nicely with selling the benefit for educational software (preschool to research) but then you did not continue with that for the other two topics. You need to sell the benefit not the fact.
That is what I need help for from marketing gurus :) So what's good about Office software and Developer
software for a teacher? :) You also need images, lots of images!
http://timesofindia.indiatimes.com/City/Ahmedabad/Gujarat-set-to-follow-Kera... Thousands of schools will be soon running Linux and teaching programming languages on this platform, Li-f-e comes with everything required for that. One of the schools started graphics design course thanks to Biswajoyti Mahanta, they use Blender, Inkscape and GIMP for that. Everyone needs Office ;) So we need someone to add all these benefits that is obvious to us to this announcement and help us sell it as a best Edu OS it is. Ciao -J -- To unsubscribe, e-mail: opensuse-marketing+unsubscribe@opensuse.org For additional commands, e-mail: opensuse-marketing+help@opensuse.org