George,
This looks great!
We might want to make a few changes to the text, but overall, I think
you've done a great job. Thanks for taking this on!
Are you assuming the text will change, i.e, the text on the cover is
placeholder for design? (and for translations!)
One minor comment: To my eye, the screenshots would be better if they
were at the bottom under the text like so:
http://www.dissociatedpress.net/uploads/openSUSE_11.2_DVDWrap_v4_test.svg
Best,
Zonker
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Joe 'Zonker' Brockmeier