On Mon, Feb 18, 2013 at 8:49 PM, Rajko
On Mon, 18 Feb 2013 09:02:46 -0800 "DuBois, Scott L."
wrote: ... I have been working in this material. Here you can check a preview: - http://paste.opensuse.org/30920039 ... I think it's a great job! You do really great work Victor and it's all very much appreciated. : )
Really good work.
Just few typos (Mr. Scott please correct me where I'm wrong (yes I know it should be Mr. DuBois)):
Linux-based --> Linux based (2nd is correct)
while listening to music --> while listening music (1st is correct)
or desktop software --> or desktop computer (This can go either way, but computer would probably be more appropriate)
thatpromotes --> that promotes (2nd is correct)
<BLINK>take12.2 --> take 12.3 </BLINK> (2nd is correct - needs updating)
compu-ter --> computer (2nd is correct - obviously) : )
System Requirements --> Minimum system requirements (I would suggest = Minimum System Requirements)
atleast --> at least (2nd is correct)
Copyright notice seems obsolete, it is SUSE Inc. not Novell inc.(Yes, Jos announced this a few days ago, it is SUSE now)
PS. It seems that Victor is growing fast. (much faster then anticipated :)
Agreed, Victor is doing and EXCELLENT job!
-- Regards, Rajko. --
-- God bless ! Scott DuBois www.ROGUEHORSE.com openSUSE -- To unsubscribe, e-mail: opensuse-artwork+unsubscribe@opensuse.org To contact the owner, e-mail: opensuse-artwork+owner@opensuse.org