Author: ug Date: Thu May 10 10:20:15 2012 New Revision: 68130 URL: http://svn.opensuse.org/viewcvs/yast?rev=68130&view=rev Log: some docu fixes Modified: trunk/autoinstallation/doc/xml/Introduction.xml trunk/autoinstallation/doc/xml/Profile.xml Modified: trunk/autoinstallation/doc/xml/Introduction.xml URL: http://svn.opensuse.org/viewcvs/yast/trunk/autoinstallation/doc/xml/Introduction.xml?rev=68130&r1=68129&r2=68130&view=diff ============================================================================== --- trunk/autoinstallation/doc/xml/Introduction.xml (original) +++ trunk/autoinstallation/doc/xml/Introduction.xml Thu May 10 10:20:15 2012 @@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ </para> <para> &ay;2 is not an automated GUI system. This means that in most - cases many screen will be skipped, i.e. you will never see the language + cases many screens will be skipped, i.e. you will never see the language selection interface. &ay;2 will simply pass the language parameter to the sub-system without displaying any language related interface. @@ -116,7 +116,7 @@ <itemizedlist> <listitem> <para> - Preparation: All relevant information about the target system are + Preparation: All relevant information about the target system is collected and turned into the appropriate directives of the profile. The profile file is transferred onto the target system where its directives will be parsed and transformed to &yast;2 conforming Modified: trunk/autoinstallation/doc/xml/Profile.xml URL: http://svn.opensuse.org/viewcvs/yast/trunk/autoinstallation/doc/xml/Profile.xml?rev=68130&r1=68129&r2=68130&view=diff ============================================================================== --- trunk/autoinstallation/doc/xml/Profile.xml (original) +++ trunk/autoinstallation/doc/xml/Profile.xml Thu May 10 10:20:15 2012 @@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ The control file is in most cases a configuration description for a single system. It consists of sets of resources with properties including support for complex - structures representations such as lists, records, trees and large + structures such as lists, records, trees and large embedded or referenced objects. </para> @@ -26,13 +26,7 @@ easier to learn and remember when attempting to configure a new system. </para> <para> - Using XML, you can eliminate (nearly) all of the configuration - file parsing and error handling— an external XML parser can do that instead - (especially if it is a validating parser). To make sure the control file is - well-formatted and the syntax valid, you can run the control file - through a validating parser before it is actually used for automatic - installation. This is especially required if you prefer to edit the - profile manually. + The AutoYaST2 control file uses XML to describe the system installation and configuration. XML is a commonly used mark up and many users are familiar with the concepts of the language and the tools used to process XML files. If you edit an existing control file or create a control file using an editor from scratch, it is strongly recommended to validate the control file using a validating XML parser. </para> <para> -- To unsubscribe, e-mail: yast-commit+unsubscribe@opensuse.org For additional commands, e-mail: yast-commit+help@opensuse.org