Mailinglist Archive: opensuse-project (422 mails)

[Basil Chupin <blchupin@xxxxxxxxxxxx>]

On 09/12/2010 11:51, Jos Poortvliet wrote:

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> Ok. Here goes. Attached the almost-final draft.

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I think there are areas which need a bit more attention.

First:


Target users
We cater for users who are interested in computers and want to 
experiment, learn or get work done.


The most important target audience is mentioned last - ie those who want 
to get work done. Those who want to get work done should be mentioned first.

Second:


What do we not focus on?
The openSUSE community has its goals and targets; consequently there are 
things that are not in the direct focus of our community. *This does of 
course not mean* it is not possible

The part in bold lettering should read: "Of course this does not mean it 
is not possible......".



Three:

openSUSE does not:
* Oversimplify the system to the point where configuring it becomes 
harder. We prefer flexibility over an (extreme) focus on ease of use.
* Always *having* the latest and greatest in the shipped releases.


The word here should be "*have*" and not "having" so that the whole 
thing would read, "openSUSE does not always have the latest and 
greatest......".



For your consideration.

BC


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